by Gregg Rowe
january one
quilted snow patches melted
by last night's rainfall
by Gregg Rowe
january one
quilted snow patches melted
by last night's rainfall
Author notes
Written May 14th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- ..::Snow Leaf::.. by false truths.
400 points, ended May 17, 2004, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Being from So Cal, I don’t get to see all that much snow, unless it gets really cold during the winter and there is snow on the mountains. This gave me such marvelous images that remind me of those times.
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This was a true write, I was in Ottawa for New Year's Eve and coming back to Montreal on New Year's day. it rained the night before instead of snowed and the sun was shining as we drove back and the the fields of snow looked like quilted patched from turning to sheets of ice, just impressive and a beautiful sight as you drove down the highway. Thanks for reading my works and commenting. Gregg
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This is an excellent example of a Haiku. After reading some of your work, i'm really glued to your inspirational talent. Although I live in England, I used to live in Canada too, and this small powerful write really portrayed the beauty of the land well. Kate
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Great
Yes short and sweet and so much in just those few words. Best of luck in the contest. Keep them Excellent writes coming. -
Short and sweet! Just the way I like em'. The imagery of "quilted" snow patches was really neat!
Good stuff, chubbpower -
Yummy imagery of the quilted snow patches..I miss the snow bunches..haven't seen any REAL snow in years. Sigh. This brings it back though
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