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why?

are you here to help me?
or to bring me down even more
i know you say you love me
but most times im not even sure
we always fight
like day and night
its like a routene
and nothings ever right
why is life stupid?
why does it suck?why am i so unhappy?
why am i not loved?

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Written May 14th, 2004

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  • crow69
    May 15, 2004
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    believe it or not, you are loved. i had to learn that the hard way. you sound just like me and my boyfriend, except i couldn't take anymore of his bullshit so i broke it off. great write
    ~courtney~

  • RippleEffect
    May 14, 2004
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    wonderful

    wow very very nice (though it's a sad poem ) but really nice flow of words there, I can feel your frustration, your dissapointment and your unhappiness...nice work pal