as i sit here thinking
i can feel the blood beging to drip
off my arm and onto my hip.
the skin was just so easy to slice
i had to do it more than twice
as i start to regret it
i can feel myself sinking into that dark filled pit
i start to cry
wondering why
when the hell did i get so stupid
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Written May 14th, 2004
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ok im gonna say it AGAIN but i realllllllllllllllllllllly like the ending to this one
it flows well... well done. lol..... i sound like some full pro commenter... haha... or not. go me
bye lovie
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sadies.... hehe...LOOK...grapefruit..now i wonder who that is...
actually, seriuosly i really really REALLY like thiose last 2 lines...hmm...sighsigh,,,,ahem...
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oh wow...i totally understand what you are saying!!! i totally feel this poem! its like...so great!!!
lol well im gonna go check out more of your work
rock on -
This suits me so well... it touched me
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This is really sad. Look that was well written right there, you are seriously a good writer. Comment on some of my poems by the way. Such as Tearing Me From Inside or Hurt Myself to Help Others or My Only Sin Was Being Born -
this is a really good poem its so true though i really like this one its cool keep writin bec l8er
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