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ex-friends

we used to be friends
but that was then
we were inseprible
but that was then
we told eachother everything
all our hopes and thoughts
but that was then and this is now

the pain that you caused me is like a knife in my heart
and everytime i look at you
the knife digs deeper in
people say forgiving is the key
but thats what they think
and i disagree

the knife digging in my heart
is like the knife digging in my arm
and i cry as i watch the blood drip more

i was always there for you
and you betrayed me
what did i do to deserve this?
please tell me

but that is it
we were friends
but not anymore
and when you come back saying sorry
remember what you did

the knife is in
the scar is made
it cant be fixed
i was betrayed
no matter what you try to say
its over and done with
the scar was made.

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Written May 13th, 2004

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  • crow69
    May 15, 2004
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    great write