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I'm Sick of being Sick...



Head throbbing,
temperature rising,
medical ignorance
causes disguising!
Is it a cold
or something more serious,
as we listen to others,
and hear how they see us!


© alip 2004

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I feel like shit and am made to feel worse by the so called experts.

Morale: If your ill ...see a doctor.

Written May 13th, 2004

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  • buggirl
    May 23, 2004
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    aww, sorry you're sick (even though you're probibly not now,) I'm sorry you WERE sick, I know how horrible even colds can be. Anyway, I hope you get (got?) better fast.

    Jen


  • plinkyponk
    May 21, 2004
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    thats a real pity that the doctorss make you feel worse i hope you feel a bit better soon. nice poem its little and cute and it sort of gave me a picture of you sitting in bed with a thermometer sticking out of your mouth while the doctors discuss you in hushed tones...they always say its a virus and come back next week if you dont feel any better...


  • ali-p
    May 16, 2004
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    Isnt it amazing the powers of chicken soup, in Scotland no matter the ailment a good hearty bowl of chicken broth seems to be just what yer granny ordered..


  • LadyStarlight
    May 15, 2004
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    Och... keep taking the tablets hope that you feel better soon... i felt all of your ailments in such few words take care.. wrap up warm and drink chicken soup

    Blessings and Smiles

    ~LadyStarlight~


  • di ivers
    May 15, 2004
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    hey sweetie i am sorry to hear that you have been a bit under the weather again..i am here for you wish i could be a bit closer though..you know i would do my best to take care of ya...sending lots of prayers your way..take it easy for a while so as DI's orders..love ya lots miss you bunches...wish you good health..take care

    ~~DI~~


  • terbear96
    May 15, 2004
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    lol, very nice,, im sick also, i hate it, i have a ball tournamtnt, i cant breathe or anything... its sux! but i love ball and i still try hard! aswlays i do! i love sports! and hate being sick! summer cold here we come! well take care and lata dayz
    Terri


  • yumanbeing
    May 14, 2004
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    take the blue pills
    if that doesnt work take the red ones ....
    take both at the same time with aspirin ....

    that will be 80 dollars - cash - please - thank you and see you in 6 months


  • cherche -d -ame
    May 14, 2004
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    Sorry to hear that you are feeling under the wheather , and hope that soon you will have found out what is wrong and recuperate fast , Gordon needs ya
    Best wishes
    Reenie & Max

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