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Spring

Spring,
The cherry flowers
in perfect harmony with
the plum blossoms.

Author notes

I think this is the first poem I have record of me writing.  I'm just guessing at the date, though, since I didn't date it when I wrote it.  I suspect the date is accurate to within a few months.  If I'm right about when I wrote it, I'd have been 10.
Written April 10th, 1993

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