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The bratty computer

My computer is really a brat.
It simply will not type an @.
It keeps trying to crash,
guess I'll give it a bash.
Oi! Now it's calling me fat.

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Written May 13th, 2004

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  • chasedbythecows
    May 16, 2004
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    "Oi! Now it's calling me fat."<--very unexpected and because of that, incredibly funny...hehe

    yellow daffodils screaming at the moon,
    ~colleen~