Looking closely into my life
Seeing the goodness and wonder...
How it would be to stay alive
You will never stop just to ponder
Listening closely to the heart beat
It beats one hundred tewnty five.
It's almost like you're made of wheat
But I will still remain alive.
Staying alive
Is what I plan to do.
Staying alive
It is destined to be my que.
Author notes
I hope I win!!!
It doesn't really mater, I just want the good people to see my work...
Written May 13th, 2004
A contest entry
- teacher, teacher, I declare ...... (Contest for new members in May) by AP Greeters.
300 points, ended June 2, 2004, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I hope I win!!!
Not a hope sorry. Rules are rules. Read them, read them again, then enter a winning poem, you can do it, all you need is commitment, go for it, Dave. -
This is nicely done, UnknownStranger but I am having difficulty seeing how this fits with the contest criteria, which is to write about a teacher.
You have plenty of time to enter a new poem, that is capable of winning, that pertains to the rules.
Welcome to AP
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Interesting poem, but it doesn't fit with the contest criteria. There is still a lot of time to enter another poem.
Welcome to Allpoetry
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I like you theme hee but It doesn't seem to fit in with the criteria for the contest. However you still have lots of time to enter again - check out the criteria and see where it takes you.
Welcome to Allpoetry
~Von~
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