I love the way the serated blade
rips through flesh,
so quick and beautiful.
I love to watch the blood.
The way it drips,
the way it runs,
off my arm to the floor
the pain inside me transfered out.
im happy now.
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Written May 14th, 2004
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EXCELLENT!!!
AMEN! I can identify with this feeling so well. Great job, keep up the good work! -
awesome. i know the feeling.... sometimes its the only thing u can count on
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I never cut myself with a serated blade before. But that poem rocks though. I'm adding you to my favorites you fucking rule!
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yeah me like it too actually i love it i think we should make a book of our poems
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i love your poem becca
its cools
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