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Lap Dance




Keep your hands to yourself dear
My sexuality you'll fear
Our engagement of attraction
Our sexual relaxation

Dance for me you dirty girl
Make me want what I can't have
Excite my senses to near climax
Make me want to touch you



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Written May 12th, 2004

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  • Ember Rose
    May 16, 2004
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    For 'imaginary food' you were short, but quite descriptive...lol. Has an interesting way about it. Even though I may seem a bit of a prude at times, I do enjoy reading something a bit more 'exotic'...lol. For me, this IS exotic. Hmmm...for that matter, maybe its my mid-life crisis that drew me to this by the title. Rose


  • thehittmann
    May 15, 2004
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    mmmmmmmm imaginary food


  • May 15, 2004
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    AAHHH, there you are, you been hiding? or enjoying naked women without me huh? hehe cool little poem you have here. Makes me wanna go and watch, just hope her name's not eve hehe, take care, hope to cya soon, dave

  • mademoiselle
    May 14, 2004
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    ohhhhh hot one way to breathe no breath!!! hahahahahahaha can you help me make a website cheers big ears