~ Ada Maria ~
mother
i remember
the foyers of your eyes
leading to the chambers
inside your heart
i still charlston
in the dome
of your soul
Author notes
My mother.
Written May 12th, 2004
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A contest entry
- mothers day poems by x Bright Eyes x.
525 points, ended March 15, 2007, 27 entries
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hi i thought this was very nice thank you for entering it in to my contest i wish you the best of luck loved the write
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Beautiful Tribute
If this is your mother, I feel certain that we have a “genealogy connection somewhere..." My French line is that of Hugues II 'Hugh' Capet* born 14 Jun 939 (who married to Adélaïde D'Aquitaine); the 1st. of the Capetian Kings of France.
Anyway, your pictures also (at times) remind me of myself; and I also love enhancing and changing arty photos. Also, this is an outstanding tribute, “thank you…”
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Priceless
Beautifuly done Myra on the reflections and memories of your mom what is exactly charlston? T his shows the deepth of seeing within your m oms heart of being lovely through her eyes into her soul.. Tenderly done....Love ya,Sherry
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Nicely penned Myra........ quite moody, delicate and rich with a heart's truest feeling.
Don -
This is beautiful. Your words are calming and inspiring as always. The picture is beautiful also.
Very nicely done.
Mada -
Nicely written with lovely imagery. Loved the dancing in the dome of your soul line.
Nice presentation as well. Two thumbs up! GRIN -
dancing with the thoughts of love, forever fresh in the heart and mind. this is a beautiful poem myra.
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if only i could know a mothers love that you feel... a treasure greater than gold ah its not empty halls its conveys but fills them with love yes
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Unfortunately I deleted your comment Birksy, but I reposted it ...
Edited on May 12, 12:43 because ''. -
birksy 2 hours ago
Be pleased, I commented! 730 critiques, 998 poems. Currently online. said:
Lovely poem. Very original, and has a space to it that conveys the empty halls. Very interesting. Thanks for sharing, birksy
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