Touch
The yearning desire
That
Disappears
Into an illuminating fog
~*~Reality~*~
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Written May 11th, 2004
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awesome. few words put down perfectly. love it.
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you misunderstand, i loved it, not liked, loved !
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- Adam
Edited on May 11, 8:30 p.m. because ''. -
Thanks Adee, for your lovely comment, I wasn't expecting any positive feedback on this one, so I'm really glad you liked
~Christine~ -
Thanks so much poetry within, i wasn't expecting positive feed back on this one!! I'm glad you liked
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ooooooh, wow christine! This was amazing. Loved the idea, loved the flow and form, loved the idea of "illuminating fog", loved the whole thing!
stunning lovey
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- Adam -
woah! this is awesome! a touch says and does so much to the mind and soul,this is really exquiste i love it! it's simply
breathtaking in such a simple way it makes me sigh after reading it,as i sit back and recall the momsnts such as this i myself have had. bravo girl!
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