As I fall to the ground
Everything goes round
The Wind in your face
Feels like its space
It feels so great
total opposite of hate
All you see is white
Nothing else in sight
Spinning
Swirling
Round and round we go
Drifting away
with nothing to say
Thoughts disappear
everything becomes clear
I see green up ahead
Suddenly I wake up in bed
Author notes
I actually wrote this in September of 2003 I found it in my room so I decided to add it. You know it kinda has the same ending with the snow day one I wrote. And its also kinda short. I hope you enjoy.
Written May 11th, 2004
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This poem is really good! I like it a lot.
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This is an uplifting write but it is also kind of sad because all of these things did not occur it was in somebodys dreams, hmph but i really like teh set up of this and the overall tone and mood to it...it presents itself well.
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There's a storm outside and I'm so HAPPY!! 
Great poem Lils!
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