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Seeking Solitude. (tanka)







how strange
seeking solitude
even
the moon and stars
leave me alone






Andrew Hide
11~05~2004

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Written May 11th, 2004

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    May 12, 2004
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    This is so good! You do put much feelings and meaning in few lines.
    Very pleasant read!
    Mari


  • Lurie
    May 12, 2004
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    Ohhh Andrew!!! This is amazing, even the background seems to be speeding by so as not to disturb you. ~Laura


  • Khoka
    May 11, 2004
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    Very beautiful. Its simplistic beauty surpasses anything I could ever dream of writing. Thank you very much for writing this.

  • Johnny Depp Freak
    May 11, 2004
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    good

    hey this is good it makes me wonder what will happen next keep up the good work... Torn Angel


  • BillS2
    May 11, 2004
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    Excellent

    Hi Andrew:
    The all powerful and all knowing Andrew Hide. Such power to even influence the Moon and Stars. LOL Interesting write Andrew. I thought it was well written and given the scope, a very dark poem. Stay close to the light switch. Thanks for this write. Bill


  • macandrew
    May 11, 2004
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    very good

    This has a very cosmic feel to it. As though the Gods have granted your request for a time-out.

    It flowed well and brings meaning far beyond its simplicity.

    John


  • Troi
    May 11, 2004
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    I like it, it flows nicely and invites the reader to continue thinking! Well done.

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