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Because He Loves Me

Ever felt like you were floating?
Residing in the clouds above everyone?
I have, when he touched me
Choosing me to be his forever

Opening our hearts to each other
We never knew we would find love like this
Needing one another to exist,
Surviving because of our love

Melting into one another
Yearningly holding on to all that we have

He holds me in the night
Ever so tenderly
Another could never take his place
Resigned to our fate
Together for eternity

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Written May 11th, 2004

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  • individuality gold member
    March 22, 2008

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    and another smiling acrostic poem, i posted one earlier a jokey one called arrogance love dances us into sweet life


  • lymabn
    June 3, 2004
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    im usually not a fan of acrostic poems even tho i have written some myself. but this is a great poem. keep it up

    brittney


  • quietly burning
    June 3, 2004
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    universal

    ooo i see that you can do this "I Love You" stuff too. These feelings u describe are amazingly universal.


  • Talia
    May 23, 2004
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    Well if he owns ya heart can I have first dibs on yer eyes? Just so I can give em a poke every now and then

    A lubbly write


  • May 23, 2004
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    Sweet

    Cool idea. Very sweet. Love is a beautiful thing.
    ~Superswoman


  • -kristin-
    May 11, 2004
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    i like how it's an acrostic. this is a really beautiful poem. very sweet. i'm glad you have someone like him. great write.
    kristin


  • candy177
    May 11, 2004
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    OMG this is just incredible. Possibly the best I've read from you yet. Isn't it great to be in love? Good luck in the contest!


  • Cemetery Rose
    May 11, 2004
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    3 thumbs up....hmmmm wait......

    AWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEE
    That was toooooooo cute and sweet. Just lovely! Your word choice was amazing!! Another great acrostic!!
    Good luck!!!
    peace and love
    Susan


  • shastadaisey123
    May 11, 2004
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    what a neat little acrostic...wishing you luck in the contest...freda


  • bambie k2004
    May 11, 2004
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    Whisper it is so beautiful..I am glad that you have somebody so special in your life..Best of luck in the contest...
    Much love
    Bambie

  • l-u-b-y-l-o-o
    May 11, 2004
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    hey! this is a beautiful piece! lovely idea for an acrostic! great word choice! it makes me want to feel those things! great write! good luck in the contest! ~lulu~

  • Essence13
    May 11, 2004
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    Wow, this is a very good write! I probably would've never guessed it was an acrostic if you didnt bold the first letters i love the way you worded this poem, it seemed perfect for what you were writing about! Great write, keep up the good work!


  • wohadreambig
    May 11, 2004
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    Nicely put together acrostic I <3ved it keep it up and thanks for entering
    J9


  • May 11, 2004
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    beautiful. good choice of words to use for the acrostic too

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