You discust me beyond belief
the very words from your mouth I rip to peices
You speak to me and I care not
I want to rip you apart
from head to toe
So why do I run back to you?
Why do I talk when you are done?
The way you walk towards me
I want to forget you
Your hair and its color
the very sound of your name
I want to throw up
I want to see you suffer
So why do I run back yo tou?
Why do I talk when youare done?
Your soul I crave to kill
I play the music loud so you wont talk
So if you, I wont hear the words to blabber
The way you eat your food
the ground that you walk upon had been tainted
The way you don't think about anything
You are dumb, a waste of flesh
So why do I run back to you?
Why do I talk when you are done?
Why do I still offer advice?
Why do I still care for your soul I crave to kill?
I run back to you every time
I talk when you are done with your rants
I hate you so much It hurts
I cant stand you I want to stab you a thousand time
With out stopping, just screaming in hate and discust
I cant wait until I do,
Until the day comes that I dont run back
when I dont talk when you are done.
Author notes
Murder should be llegalized.......who agrees with me here...hehe
Written May 10th, 2004
A contest entry
- Make me feel what you feel by Boe.
400 points, ended May 18, 2004, 38 entries
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I must say, this is quite a display of human hatred. Don't forget that hatred is an attraction.
Legalize murder? Perhaps you can get murdered and then tell us more about why it should be legalized. -
If murder was legal I think people would be alot nicer to eachother, Cause you'd never know who's got a gun. This is a good write, there are a few spelling errors but Its a really good write none the less. Good job, an keep it up.
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Great write! Best of luck in the contest!
This is awsome! Very nicely done. So much anger and hate... I love it!! I feel the same way toward my ex. Well, you really delivered. Great write! Keep up the good work and best of luck in the contest!!!!
~P.S. You're missing something from your author's comments... would hate to pass up this piece because of a missing detail.
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WASTE OF FLESH??? IS THIS ABOUT ME??? I dunno, but i hope so....i'd like you to kill me...if it's not (which i imagine it is cause i have not the slightest idea why you would think all this) then kill the motherfucker anyway! Anyone who you think deserves it, probably does. Heh, Ica is right of course, legal murder would make the world more fun than shoudl be allowed...which is probably why it IS illegal...go figure, with people like is out there...you never know.
Anyway, great write...liked t alot, course anything morbid and concerning death is a good thing...and you used my little sign thingie. I'm a waste of flesh, not excatly proud of it, but whatever, better than nothing (or the porr bastard your talking about....HAH!)
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I think murder should be legal!!!! Lol...but you knew that already, since I was the one who said it in the first place during our random McDonald's conversation. Ahh..amusing that we were talking about killing people and putting pillaging into effect in a restaurant flooded with little children
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Yer pretty cool write, i can pretty much tell u h8 the person. I agree with Blu too, Maybeee it shouldnt be legalized..heh NicenezZ
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Agreed
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well..i cant say that i agree with you..lol...but...the thought does enter my mind once in a blue moon...lol
a good read..some errors...but..all in all..different, good job on writing it
~*~blu~*~
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