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Helpless ecstacy

Her lover tied her to the bed.
She put up little fight.
He squeezed her nipples till they were red.
She was in for a hell of a night!

He cover her body in scented oil,
until she shined with luster
He got her so hot, she was ready to boil,
when he brought out the feather duster!

He tickled her till her laughs turned to pain
and then she started to plead.
that's when he made it very plain
He would satisfy her need.

Her bound legs were open for him
as he kissed her on the mound,
and slowly worked his way to her quim
the clitoris he then found.

She came so hard, she wet his face
with the scent of her love-juice
she know then that she had found her place
she hoped never to be turned loose.

He then fucked her hard and long.
She came over and over again.
She learned to sing the love-slave's song
and find pleasure in the pain.

Author notes

elementary sensuality
I WANT TO BE A PORN STAR!
Written May 10th, 2004

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  • Ktulu Blackwolfe silver member
    March 3, 2006
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    Very Hot!! Your erotic writes are very good. I thank you for sharing them and will be reading more, Keep up the great writings.

    *Ktulu Blackwolfe*


  • Mrs Dazgy
    May 11, 2004
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    BdSm PORNSTAR>>YEEHAA!!!

    hmmmmmmm...hot hot hot..lovely write babe..horny now!!..if ur gonna be a porn star can I watch?...hehehehe..BdSm pornstar..YEEEHHHHAAAAAA!!!!


  • Kei-Aira
    May 11, 2004
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    Very horny.....but not as much BDSM as some of your other works!!!!


    It's not my fault i'm a kinky bitch.

    xxx


  • Naughtygrlred
    May 10, 2004
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    nice