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strength

Sometimes I struggle to hold back the tears,
As I slowly let go of all of my fears.
Held everything that hurt inside for so long,
Always thinking I'm right,
when really I'm wrong.

With patience and time my heart will soon heal,
And with God,
I'll get over the pain that I feel.
Keeping positive about the life I was dealt,
I stop to pray and think how bad I once felt.

Now I get up each day and try to smile,
It's been hard,and took a long time,
But I'm stronger while carrying on,
and most of my fears are already gone,
And I really hope that one day,
all my pain will go away.

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Written May 9th, 2004

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  • heavenly72
    May 11, 2004
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    yes, i wrote another one. i'll read yours too! thanks kristen....love ya too!~sherry~

  • heavenly72
    May 11, 2004
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    i'll read it sweetie! I LOVE YOU VERY MUCH!~MOM~


  • DreamGirl8390
    May 10, 2004
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    mommy this is so good keep up the good right i am about to put in a new poem u can c it l8ter k. it is about leaving u and my brothers but i love u bye.


  • NakedFairy629
    May 10, 2004
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    awesome

    WOW you wrote an new poem and it is really good!! I love all your poems. You are Awesome I love YA!!