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faces

Every night i lay awake
fearing what might me take,
what dreadful mirage, but a dream
or so to me it would seem
behind my eyelids, do i see
fearful imagery,
groping hands, tearful faces
bodies seeking open spaces
am I mad? am I insane?
or am I simply inhumane?
could it be i crave their fear,
having lost all I hold dear,
now my body craves the knife
with me ends this dreadful strife,
with this stroke i am undone.....

although....
       
        once more..
   i crave the sun....

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Written May 9th, 2004

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  • That One Guy
    May 10, 2004
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    great poem it shows true emotion and confusion i likey keep writing

  • Joshuacrisel
    May 9, 2004
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    this was really good i liked this alot and i really can agree with you here it makes alot of since and i like everything it said great write and i will be reading more of your poems i really liked how this one ended it was a great write always keep writing so others can see what you have to share because so far i like everything this said i will read more