Baby's
breath, Irish bells,
Princess Diana roses,
Halloween tulips, rainbow of
colors
by Gregg Rowe
Baby's
breath, Irish bells,
Princess Diana roses,
Halloween tulips, rainbow of
colors
Baby's
breath, Irish bells,
Princess Diana roses,
Halloween tulips, rainbow of
colors
Author notes
Written May 9th, 2004
In a list
A contest entry
- Cinquain Contest # 4 by Ava Noire.
300 points, ended May 14, 2004, 29 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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An exquisite colorful cinquain. I love the picture too. I can just picture Martha planting all those flowers in her prison cell.. lol.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
ps. Thanks for the comment and the applause. -
pmsl on martha...
this is delicate, and like queen anne's lace. i bet your mother is something... -
I have to laugh at you (in a friendly manner) for bringing to light your weirdness, and adding it in the poem and staying true to you. Very innovative, fresh idea - to use many different flowers to describe you. How interesting it made this! The form is correct and I absolutely love the background.
thanks for an awesome entry!
ps I am irish too
alittle, don't know how much...or little
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Each flower represents a piece of me in my life, whether through heritage, birth, existence, for example baby's breath is my birth, Irish bells (my heritage) princess Di (my convictions on aiding the helpless) Hallowe'en tulips (my weirdness).
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Where did you find that Martha pic? Damn, that's funny. I really like this poem. The words you used worked together well, but there was almost a jerking feeling I got, like they were oxymorons (I think it just might be me), particularly with the Halloween tulips line, there's just something there under its innocence. It might just be me, but that's what I see. This is nice though, it's got a real full circle feel to it. Thanks.
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First I just HAVE to say Bravo on the Martha pic, I had to stop laughing before I could read your poem hun, I'm sorry, never cared for the woman myself, struck me too funny to see thist LOL As for your write, it reminds me of spring, but also speaks to me of serenity, how the world should be, it's just the first thing that popped in my head as I read it. The Wheel of life, so to speak. Perhaps I'm just a bit odd, but it did. I find it very serene and refreshing, a great write
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Halloween tulips are new....just came out this year, a new breed that when flourish are a striking orange that looks like pumpkin colors...can hardly wait to see them bloom (and yes, Martha Stewart is a joke)
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nicely written. like strolling through a lush garden. but from the background you chose, I take it you're merely funning with us. LOL
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Excellent
This is a dainty and darling poem that's words paint a lovely poetic bouquet of flowers to behold within mental imagery with the little help of this wonderful background.
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