Teacher...
Oh how much you have taught us...
math...S.S...
But at the end of the school year...
Its like there is nothing left to learn...
You always come up with some thing!...
Some kids hate your new assignments...
some kids love them...
OH how much i will miss you over the summer break...
But i will see you next year...
when you will have other weird...fun...exiting assignments
CANT WAIT TO SEE YOU THEN!!
Author notes
Written May 9th, 2004
A contest entry
- teacher, teacher, I declare ...... (Contest for new members in May) by AP Greeters.
300 points, ended June 2, 2004, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Not even a cryptic view of sum can steer me away from the internet slang that has become a curse on the english language, please please please change it, Yahoo has a lot to answer for. Nice poem btw,
good luck, Dave.
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I used to absolutely hate school, and could never have fathomed I would enjoy College so. Now I can relate to the feelings expressed here. My last math professor really helped me, and I felt like I went from being the worst math ditz to being a pretty decent student in math.
Well done entry here. You have expressed your thoughts rather well. "Sum," should be "some," and I think would make the poem look more polished if you skipped the internet slang, if it was your intention for it to be sum - as in SUM - then I think that is ok.
Otherwise well done.
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You must be a Maths teachers dream - actually looking forward to next year's lessons.
'sum kids' is this meant to be or just a take on being a maths teacher?
Welcome to Allpoetry and Good Luck
~Von~ -
Lovely- from the other end of the scale I'm reminded about a class who are like this, always coming up with some crazy project or bringing in a book they've read to share with the others. School is an interesting place because it has to be secure and steady so people can develop but also have flashes of excitement regularly. Wonderfully simple and honest.
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It's nice when you have something to look forward to when you go back to school after summer. Makes everything else so much less depressing
This was a cute little write, a couple of typos I'd run through the spell check though!
Good luck and thanks for entering
Hayley x x -
im not sure who its about...lol
luv ya,
~james
Edited on May 10, 7:35 because ''. -
great
nice job james...great one...i bet its latimer isnt it????huh huh huh????? u no u like latimer..lol...JK....lol..well n e ways...great job...cant wait to read sum of ur other writes...o and i have a ??.....how come on sum of ur poems it says in collaberation wit tennis-lover?????? idk..but when sumone sends u a msg...it sends to me too..so yea....o well...idc...well ttyl..o and it wont charge u for bein on it or watevr cuz u asked me tat or sumthin...so yea..wel ttyl luv ya as a friend...
-tennis-lover -
no....im not sure who. LOL
thanks!
~james -
nice james...keep it up...did u have a specific teacher in mind when you wrote this? Was it latimer? LOL! JK JK! Anyways nice sweet write...keep it up...
~me -
Lol.. this is a fun and sweet poem, jco1993
It sounds like you kinda like this teacher, huh. It's always encouraging when a teacher leaves us wanting more from her/him instead of, 'glad that teacher's out of my life'
A good entry for the contest
Good luck and welcome to allpoetry
Dee
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