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After A Homeless Christmas Party At Guy Metro (Haiku)

Missing image
by Gregg Rowe


virgin snow blanket

discarded vodka bottle

homeless person dreams

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Written May 9th, 2004

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  • -diamond tears-
    December 14, 2004
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    very nice, thanks for entering


  • astralshepherd gold member
    May 9, 2004
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    Well crafted, Gregg. I get a mixed sense in this. On one hand it feels sympathetic and the other hand it feels compassionate and on the other hand (you didn’t know i have three hands did you?) it feels somber. A wonderful mixture to keep me thinking through its compact line. Blessings ~richard


  • angelica silver member
    May 9, 2004
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    Very good Gregg, great words and loved the pic, it says it all.
    Love to you my friend~Joan


  • CIndyReed
    May 9, 2004
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    he must need alcohol imediatly, I prefer brandy , I could never give money to a homeless guy for boost, but eat something defenetly yes, but this is the cruel reality, they love the drinking, thanks for entering and good luck in the contest .


  • lisargh
    May 9, 2004
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    yea I too liked the picture,
    did make me smile a wee bit,
    as I like honesty
    sad though very sad,
    and the virgin snow blanket line spoke volumes..
    take care
    lisa x


  • cherche -d -ame
    May 9, 2004
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    Very unique sign made me smile
    Reenie

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