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Best Pet You Bet

Each morn I enjoy seeing
My pet human being
Though big and brawny, he's cute
My beaming, smiling, bearded brute
Look forward to his pretty ditty
When he calls me pretty kitty
And plies me with luscious milk
And gourmet food of every ilk
Yes my favorite and how
Definitely this cat's meow.

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Written May 8th, 2004.

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  • This flowed greatly. It was very good and very enjoyable to read. Thanks so much for entering my contest and best of luck to you!

  • A sweet little poem with some humour, I like the background as well. I like the rhyme scheme particularly where there's more than one rhyme in the line. Thank you for your entry.


  • cazzy71
    May 15

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    Cheers

    Thankyou for you entry,I enjoyed reading it,would change the one of the lines that starts with'AND' but other wise a worthy entry.


  • stella187
    May 15
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    Beautiful.

    I love it. The best I have read so far in the contest.

    Jenny

  • Judith Chandler
    October 12, 2008
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    Great role reversal here from my own favourite breed of animal. Isn't possible cats do this ALL the time. On occasion, I also have felt like I'm being cast in the role of "brute" as my cat escapes into the hall and I follow clumsily behind.

    A lovely write.


  • Anu-Nataraj
    October 10, 2008

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    hahahaha
    adooraablllle dear friend !!!!
    i loved it ....specialy the last line....

    i love it..hope to hear more from you..

    Good Luck In The Contest !!!!!

    much love and regards,

    Anagha-Nataraj


  • takemypainaway
    August 29, 2008
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    hehe so cute your kitty sound very adorible and special to you!!
    best of luck
    --kat


  • Luciferian Aeon
    August 22, 2008
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    Speaking the truth on that one! Master of no cats are we.


  • Blossom Fairy
    June 6, 2008

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    A very seductive and sweet kitty that deserves the BEST and I can tell that she always gets just that! YUM!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    May 11, 2008

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    Nicely written, very sweet! I love animals and like the way you personfied there thoughts and feelings.


  • daffodilblossom
    January 14, 2008
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    nice

    i like this good luck


  • annamoy
    January 2, 2008

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    Nice to hear one from the cat's point of view. Very entertaining quirky read. Good luck in the contest.


  • Frodofan silver member
    January 1, 2008
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    Cute. Wasn't expecting it to be from the cat's point of view.


  • He Is My Lighthouse
    November 3, 2007
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    Good luck in the contest, this was cute.


  • Pollycheck
    October 20, 2007

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    Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. Very well written. i think it is pretty obvious who the master of the house is here. I especially like your last line;

    "Definitely this cat's meow."


  • Foofy
    August 18, 2007
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    i like it!

    it is fun and very enjoyable!!!


  • Melodies
    June 15, 2007

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    A smart and loving cat!

    Yes, cats love us and it's a good thing because being loved is so important! I am delighted to read this precious poem! Thank you!


  • KnightOfTheRose gold member
    April 14, 2007

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    wow I Loved this! Cats are the best animal ever!!! My awesome cat Oreo spends every night sleeping on my pillow curled up around my head! she is soooooooooo awesome! I definitely Loved this poem! I Loved the background too that cat is soooooooooo cute! I just want to hug her/him! anyway excellent work and good luck in my contest!!!!!!!!!




    -Steve-


  • Ampad
    May 26, 2004
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    Too cute! You’re missing some spaces after commas, and the rhythm is a bit off at times, but definitely an enjoyable piece! Thanks for entering my contest.


  • forgotten dream
    May 25, 2004
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    adorable

    awwwwwww!! this was such a sweet poem. it made me smile a lot, and wish i had a kitty to love me ^_^ the ryhming worked well for this piece, and gave it a up-beat, humorous tone. adorable piece. good luck in the contest!!!


  • candy177
    May 21, 2004
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    Awwwww you had me smiling from beginning to end! What an adorable piece!!!


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    May 12, 2004
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    great,superb

    that was wonderful,it flowed great,and it was so cute,keep up the fabulous work!!poetic janis

  • suicidaldream05
    May 12, 2004
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    Aww this was very cute. I love the picture!! awww...I love kitties... Good luck placing in this contest. Thanks for sharing your talent. Keep up the excellent writing. Take it easy now and keep it real.

    <3,
    Alison


  • Blue moon
    May 12, 2004
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    Hi there,
    This was a very good piece, I really enjoyed it. Thank you ever so much for sharing.

    All the best to you and yours

    Blue moon


  • Naughtygrlred
    May 8, 2004
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    yummy


  • Sherry gold member
    May 8, 2004
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    Cute, write gramps Hugs and love,Sherry

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