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The Rescue




Daring knight
Rescues princess
Away from danger
Gallantly rides
Over the hills
Nearing home

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Written May 7th, 2004

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A contest entry

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  • MissHapps
    May 11, 2004
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    TOO COOL!!! I love the story type acrostics and this just rocks! I hate to think a Dragon slain while upper class prevails!!!j.k.


  • poetryality silver member
    May 8, 2004
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    GREAT Acrostic! I can see all that you've mentioned as it happens in slow motion. EXCELLENT! I do believe I read a poem about your son! HAPPY MOTHERS DAY!!!

    Renee


  • freakonaleash
    May 7, 2004
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    o i like it it was cool! i like dragons, they are cool, and that is a really cool poem!


  • May 7, 2004
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    This is cool! lol, it is short and snappy. Thanks for sharing this and good luck in my contest...

  • l-u-b-y-l-o-o
    May 7, 2004
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    hey! this is cool! i like acrostics! its pretty, i like things about princesses and knights! ~lulu~


  • Talia
    May 7, 2004
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    Another short and powerfully packed imagery. Another excellent Acrostic I think you're doing fantastic with these. Keep it up eh?

    Good luck

    Natalia


  • candy177
    May 7, 2004
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    Nice acrostic love the part about rescuing princess, although maybe it should be princesses?


  • Jillosophy
    May 7, 2004
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    Good luck in the contest. This is pretty nifty.
    I would have been trying this, for the first time, with a word like kumquat or platypus, not knowing any better.
    Because I'm sick and need help.
    Good luck!
    jill


  • Cemetery Rose
    May 7, 2004
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    Interesting....don't you love the bold feature.... love the image.. Good luck!!
    peace andl love
    Susan

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