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Fire



Flame tossed carelessly
Ignites barren land
Resources are depleted
Earth is scarred


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Written May 7th, 2004

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  • dragonsteel
    May 28, 2004
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    This was totally awesome and thanks SOOO much for entering. The best thing I like about a contest is you get to read things you wouldn't normally get around to reading. Thanks again, it was terrific!

  • dragonsteel
    May 28, 2004
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    ohhhh very nicely done. I like the haiku-style/acrostic. Very unique. Thanks for entering!


  • Cemetery Rose
    May 9, 2004
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    You are just too good at these I really like the last line. Awesome imagery
    peace and love
    Susan


  • May 7, 2004
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    Cool acrostic , thanks for sharing this and good luck in my contest.....


  • Talia
    May 7, 2004
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    Actually I was sitting thinking looks pretty short for an acrostic, but the imagery in this is bloody brilliant.

    Good luck

    Natalia


  • candy177
    May 6, 2004
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    Ohhh this is good! I like it...I've always been partial to fire...great job!

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