On a dark night when I was bored and not tired,
I went down stares and watched a show so now I'm wired.
The main character is so hot!
While his older evil brother is so... not.
Inuyasha, how I wish you were mine,
to see you for real would be divine.
To have you fight off an evil demon to protect me would be
simply marvelous, don't you agree?
Inuyasha, how I love your silver hair and claws,
but now in my poem I must pause.
I can see what your face would be like if I read this to you
you would look grossed out like I was a bug or a flue.
But my love for you knows no bounds,
and when I think of your mighty powers my mind goes 'Zounds!'
I thank you my dear sister for introducing me to this awesome guy
when I think of how mean the full demons are to him I could cry.
If I had the choice I'd give him the gem he so desires
even if by doing so his attraction for me expires.
Inuyasha, I love you it's true
and now I will leave you alone for my poem is through.
Author notes
heh, ok, so it's really lame. I wrote this for my sister, and it was ment to eb sarcastic. But I do liek Inuyasha, just not as much as this poem suggests. I like Shippo much better, but whatever.
this is option 3
pie
Inuyasha
... hope I'm not forgetting any rules..
A contest entry
- This is Your Kind of Contest! by Artemis Gem.
300 points, ended February 20, 2006, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Anime/Manga Fans Welcome! by Angel Lunarious.
390 points, ended February 23, 2007, 14 entries
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What did you think
Comments
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I love this poem! I used to watch Inuyasha all the time but with school..it's difficult!
Thanks for entering and good luck!
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hey... like shessomaru...
...interesting
Keep it up!
Pegleg -
great
great poem i like inuyasha so much to i stay up late just to watch it lol great poem -
Hey.... I remember this one! And look! It's dedicated to me! *warm fuzzies* Awwwwwwwwwwww thanks!
(I still say Miroku's better and you know it 
!!!) Loved this line as it was just so.... silly lol. "But my love for you knows no bounds,
and when I think of your mighty powers my mind goes 'Zounds!'" lol... zounds.... teehe. -
Inuyasha rocks! Woo! Sesshomaru is totally hot too, I can't believe you said he wasn't. I'm in love with the anime guys, it's hard to resist. Great poem! I enjoyed reading it.
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Nice job! hey, sessoumarus cool!!! lol thats ok...great description! you did a very good job on this, and good luck!!!
Gem~chan -
Cool piece! Yeah Coconut is right, it does sound like her! Anyway, this is nice.
Good Luck in the contest.
~Achika~ -
HEY how dare you say sesshomaru isn't hott!! cause both of em are!! hot sesshomaru!! lol well other wise good poem!! and Inu-Yasha is HOT!!
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Hehe yeah coconut is right. I started twitching whenevr you said "inuasha" because it's "inuYasha"......notice the "y"
AND SESSOUMARU IS HOT DAMNIT!!! 
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Marissa
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You remind me of... Well, me I love Inuyasha, too, which brings me to point out a few spelling errors... Sorry, but I must
First of all, it's Inuyasha with a y if you didn't realize it. Secondly, you spelled flu with an e at the end and it's just flu. Other than that, it was awesome (though I think Sesshomaru's hot, too ). Best of luck to you in the contest and awesome work!
Coconut
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This is so cute..I started watching this cartoon with my daughter..she doesn't understand mostly seeings how she's only 4..but she loves the cartoon none the less...I believe I enjoy it as well
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great
hahaahha o naw I LOVE INUYASHA TOOO hahhaaha funni.. great write -
Very good poem! And with Inuyasha too!
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*squeals* yay! although I still haven't actually seen inuyasha. . . anyway. great write. eeeeee! that was so sweet and cute! otakus and fan girls attack! yay! *glomps*
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haahaa.. i like it.. i don't know how inuasha is but this is good... by the way how is inuasha is.. syay cool...
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I can totally understand. I always have crushes on anime guys. But my fave is Naraku. (Boooos from around the world) I know I know its probably better i like everyone. I am such a perv when I saw him naked I thought OH holy hell look at those pecks. Yall think I would be better with Miroku?
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lol! Awwww lmc! How cute.... I didn't know you had the hots for Inuyasha!! *girly squeal* This poem really gave me some good laughs, especially the line, "The main character is so hot! While his older evil brother is so... not." rofl! -- there are SO many Sesshemorou fans who would beat the crap out of you for that (they're all convinced that Sesshy is way hot and Inuyasha is a jerk... heh) Anyways, thanks for entering my contest (and make sure to check out the other poems in it, they are REALLY good)
~CC (your tv-watching forcing sis fwahaha) -
this is really funny. it made me laugh. but very sweet too!~Green
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