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AddICTed

This obstacle in front of me
Screaming out for my apathy
Why it has chosen me
I am easy

Will I give in
Not now not at least until I'm closer
Maybe this is the time I will beat him

Kill that voice in there
Is it real
Stay on topic
Beat it
Beat this obstacle

Can I
With positive self talk you can
Ohh
I am talking to myself
Stay on topic

Topic tropical who now
What
Shut up
You know you want me
I thought I only had one voice other than mine
Now two
Don't forget me
Take it
You have already given in
no
yes yes yes
SHUT UP

This is the part of the movie with the triumphant music
What
Where is it
Oh no
I've given in
Was it my fault
no
yes yes yes
SHUT UP

Get out of my head
Breath Breath Breath
NO
He's doin it
No he's not
No I'm not
Yes he is
Ahh there he goes
WHO ARE YOU
I told you not to forget me
No that was him
Ohh
GET OUT OF MY HEAD

Wait for it Wait for it Wait for it Wait for it Wait for it Wait for it Wait for it Wait for it
Wait who are you two
Us, we're new
Shit
Leave
There it's done
In my vains
Its spelled vane
How do you know how I spell in my head
You told us
Oh wait, its here
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Now I'm alone
Still no music
FUCK

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Written May 6th, 2004

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  • pyrrhic
    May 7, 2004
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    Hmmmm....
    Sounds like a song. Very contemporary (haha, that rhymed...). Nice write.