the world, brighter now
than ever before.
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Written May 6th, 2004
A contest entry
- two lines or less ;) by slowlydying.
300 points, ended May 7, 2004, 23 entries
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lol for 2 line that was good and i read it lol yay
good 1 ben
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Though the Haiku form generally is written in the three line 5-7-5-syllable count, I feel you did a fine job with just the two lines for it. You kept it within the realm of the more liberal form. It also gives it the feel of an epiphany that just occurred. Nicely done.
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Hope inspiring. Sometimes the short thoughts have a lot to say.
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very good mate!
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Aww makes me want to know why...
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it's a very good poem, i really enjoyed reading it, thanks so much for entering and good luck
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what was the thought behind this one? it is thought provoking though. in a weird way...i liked it!
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