There was a unicorn from Eden
Whose heart was really bleeding
He asked the dear Lord
To please make one more
So that they could do some breeding.
~by Gregg Rowe~
There was a unicorn from Eden
Whose heart was really bleeding
He asked the dear Lord
To please make one more
So that they could do some breeding.
There was a unicorn from Eden
Whose heart was really bleeding
He asked the dear Lord
To please make one more
So that they could do some breeding.
Author notes
Based on 'The Unicorn Song' by the Irish Rovers and to answer the question why there are no unicorns today!
Written May 6th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Magical Creatures by AerinAlanna.
300 points, ended December 29, 2005, 7 entries
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Haha this is humorous, though kind of sad. Very sweey and a nice write about poor unicorns and their plight. Good luck in the contest!
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Was it just his heart was bleeding, or were other parts of him needing...something
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lol this was cute. simple but worthy of a giggle or two. thank you for taking the time to enter and good luck!
love and hugs
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Ahhh yes, wouldn't be wonderful if they could! They are exquisite in every way! This is great poem, brings a smile
thanks for entering our contest and best of luck, Ann I adore the picture
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tells the tale of love, requirement and needs
simple, pure and eloquent
well done
mike -
I love this... it starts off so mystically and dreamy... and ends so practically and simplisticly!
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Aww.. I like this one. Unicorns are so beautiful. It would be absolutely amazing to see one. You have to have seen the movie "Legend"... OH! I love Tim Curry and the young Tom Cruise. An excellent unicorn film.
Anyway. Your poem is terrific. It makes me smile.
~Bezoar -
cool! I love mythical creatures and this is so good. This had flow and I quite liked the last 2 lines. lol, anyway, thanks for sharing this and good luck in my contest...
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lovely limerick, lyrical and smooth a lot like the unicorns. Good luck in the contest.
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Hey, I can't have a friend who is a non-beleiver!!!
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Beautiful - I'm not sure I believe in unicorns but now I want to!
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Unicorns still do exist! Then again, I believe faries and leprechauns exist as well. Anywho, very short, but very cute peice.
Vampress -
Dawnknight: these are sent to me by people here who know that I collect anything with Winnie the Pooh, Betty Boob, Lord of the Rings and Unicorns. I really appreciate the mail I get and find these types of pics, so if you wish to use any here, go ahead...it is about sharing. There is one BACKGROUND that can be shared with one condition and it is on my poem 'Listen as She Sews' on my front page of my AP Library.
Edited on May 06, 2:41 p.m. because ''. -
Yes, In my dreams unicorns still excists since I live in my dreams more then my reality. But this is a very cute poem indeed, short and sweet. I do have to ask you where you got the background it is perfect and so beautiful. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
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Great Job!
Very good Job thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! Laters! Buh ByeZ!
-Little Tim
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hahahaha cute...
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Pack your bags girl, leave your hubby at home, we are off on a wordly adventure, do you believe in fairies!
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Hehe, let's go.
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Jumping up and down, jumping up and down I want to join your Geek Group because I know there is one unicorn out there and want to spend the rest of my life searching all the round corners of the earth for it. Want to join me!
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LOL I like the humor in this ..very cute, and of course, I am one of those geeks who thinks SOMEWHERE hiding on this planet at least one unicorn exists ..so ..I would like it
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Hehe, I love it. Very cute. Personally, I would have written the second line as, "Whose heart was really bleedin'", but then the last line would have to go, "So that they could do some breedin'". Maybe that is just me. Great job, Gregg. Good luck!
~Tawnya~
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snort...lol..very good i guess even unicorns get a bit horny..i loved it.
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