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Left Me Alone

Reasons shed this thought,
Wanting love to be so true,
Pure as a diamond,
Nirvana enters this blood,
Stream flows so softly,
Slowly bleeding out the hurt,
Strong bonds tend to break loose,
The moment starts to vanish,
Reasons all fall as it flows quicker,
Feeling the end is near,
Smiling,
knowing that you were never here...

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Written May 6th, 2004

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  • Justinintendo
    October 13, 2005
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    Wow, this is good, good luck to you, have fun writing and continue to write, there is a future for you.