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Grave Sheds

Everything is broken,
Life is spiraling down,
Still awake at tears,
Darkness flows this river,
Blood sheds this heart,
Souls lost over love,
Your heart stands pure,
Kiss me while I shiver,
One last dance,
I know,
This smile cannot last...

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Written May 6th, 2004

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