Making each day a sheer pleasure
You must meet my all poetry treasure
Funny as hell, I am so glad that
Reading about toast led me to her
I love to hear about her little boy
Enjoying the stories of her broken leg
Never knowing what kind of poem she will
Deliver next, the anticipation is a thrill
Cheering me up when I am down
Always has a poem in that brain of hers
Never at a loss for words on any subject
Definitely a great friend
You couldn't ask for anyone better
1 great person
7 million lists since she got a preferred membership
7 thousand trophies she's on her way to having
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Candy177 is one of my best friends on here and an awesome poet.... everyone check her out....NOW
allpoetry.com/poets/candy177
Written May 5th, 2004
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That was sweet of you to write such a poem for someone you care about at AP. I would say more, but I'm really behind on my contest... Damn computer viruses... Anywho, great work. Best of luck to you and thanks for entering my contest!
Wolf Goddess
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Attacking the credibility
Though it was a pretty good poem
Let me know about more poems
Ever wonder what makes her tick
As if she knew who you are
Still you can never know
There is a point of no return
Yes?
Or is it no?
Underneath it all?
Tired or did you really try
Running rampant in your head
I never really take this form seriously
End the cycle
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Its always nice to pay tribute to a friend. They need to know every now and again that you appreciate them. I liked this peice because it was very kind hearted toward this person.
-J.
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It's been a while since I've read some of your work and this was your newest one according to my favorites list... Always nice to read about appreciation for someone else, or even life in general... Uplifting piece to say the least
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This is just so nice of you! She must be very happy to have a good friend like you also, I bet she loves this poem and it was so sweet of you to dedicate this to her, Thanks for sharing and keep on penning!Laters!
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Ohhhhhhhhh I see how it is.
Now you have to write one with this name
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Just kidding a lovely write
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Awwwwwwe great job. You are so awesome at those acrostics! And every word yoou wrote is true!
peace and love
Susan
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hey! this is really nice! its so sweet! awww...its lovely! i wish someone would write me a nice poem, all of my friends hate poetry...especially mine! great write! ~lulu~
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Excellent
This is just tooooo sweet....
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Hey- what about me?? LOL... this was very sweet, whisper! Yeah, she's very cool to be with, talk to, etc... but no, you can't have her; she's mine, MINE I tell you!
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AWWWWWWW this is soooooo sweet!!!!! Pft I didn't like it...sheesh I was reading another poem when you sent me the link!!! I don't know what to say...getting a little misty over here...I'm putting a link to this on my author's page (make the people come here to read it and say how sweet you are LOL)...oh and the background is perfect (even if it is one of AP's haha)!
Thank you thank you - you are wonderful!!!
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Great Job!
Awe, this is really sweet of you to pen of your dear friend here at AP, it's so nice to be loved and cared about, and I just have a feeling that she's going to love this, I did!
Thanks for sharing you!
-Timothy
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