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Night of the Cereal Killers

Captain Crunch likes to crunch heads
with the son of Toucan Sam
while FrankenBerry and Count Chocula
make a tasty brain-sauce jam!

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Written May 5th, 2004

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  • AnakhJugalotus
    April 17, 2005
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    That was great, the name made me think of the movie Hackers, but the poem made me laugh i like it


  • Desire gold member
    May 20, 2004
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    Captain Crunch is my fav cereal
    And I gotta have me a bowl
    Short but sweet to the bitter end
    As I ate the Toucan whole

    Great job on this piece~ Desire

  • Desire gold member
    May 16, 2004
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    Tahutihotep~
    Thank you so much for your entry and I will be back to make a comment after the contest~
    I will be judging soon~
    Thank you for your entry~
    Best wishes to you in the contest~
    Desire


  • Cristos
    May 12, 2004
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    short and funny, but lacking storyline. good lux
    peace
    Chris


  • shastadaisey123
    May 12, 2004
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    this is cool.....good luck in contest...freda


  • Deviantpoetess
    May 12, 2004
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    great write

    ahh this is interesting funny...Froot Loops..hmm got Milk?
    Thanks for sharing
    Lori!


  • Almighty Aphrodite gold member
    May 8, 2004
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    Brain-sauce jam? lol! I have heard quite a few stories about the "cereal killers". That little leprechaun from Lucky Charms? Beware of him! He's not quite as sweet-looking as you may think! lol... I have never cared much for Cap'n Crunch, but my cousins love him. One of them is even starting to look like a Captain Crunch! This is very cute. Thanks for the uplifting laugh. The way I'm feeling, I needed it!

    Many blessings,

    Raven Aurora


  • candy177
    May 7, 2004
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    Cute - I happen to like Peanut Butter Crunch myself, although it's no match for Cracklin' Oat Bran!


  • Desiree Darkk
    May 6, 2004
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    Hehehe. Cute and my favorite cereal too. My daughter got me to eating the Captain Peanutbutter Crunch and even though she's a bit older now, and eating special K, I still eat the peanutbutter. Good luck in the contest.

    Desiree

  • kiddwolf
    May 6, 2004
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    very cool, but you need to add more cereal... like snap, crackle, and pop.. or thet is all ways toni the tiger.. and how about deano pebbles... if think of more i will tell you..


  • Naughtygrlred
    May 5, 2004
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    lol

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