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Don't!!!!!

Don't pretend to like me,
I know it's not true.
Don't feel sorry for me
just because I'm not you.
Don't talk about me behind my back
like I'm dead or insane.
I have feelings you know,
that cry over every little thing.
Don't feel bad for me because I'm poor,
be happy that I'm not some bratty little rich girl.
Don't pretend to stick up for me
when you don't even care.
Finally, don't even talk to me
unless you have something true to say.

Author notes

I know this one isn't as good as my first and i also had a problem w/ my ending.  so if you know what could make it better or sumthing please tell me!
Written May 5th, 2004

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  • megz
    May 6, 2004
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    this is a really great poem great job i can relate to you on almost all of this great job your a good writer keep it up EXELENT take care


  • brokendarkness
    May 5, 2004
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    hey this one is really good too... i really like your poetry is really down to earth, your a really good writer with allot of talent. i hope that you use it to its full extend and write dome more kisck ass peoms lol