Wild packs of family dogs maunder
The cracked tarmac like messages
Softly whispering to the survivors
Of the marvels of a cling-filmed heart
Author notes
Hope you enjoy this.
Written May 5th, 2004
A contest entry
- An Escape Monthly Contest by .
300 points, ended June 2, 2004, 6 entries
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Amazing metaphors and imagery. Such a great poem. It was straightforwad and amazing...<3
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great pome well done love sara
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Great
I liked it, I think it lacked a certain something though- can't put my finger on it. The metaphors were great though, brought an extra flavor to the poem. Great work!
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This was fantastic
It was a really nice poem and straight to the point... From imagine27
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It took me a moment to get some of the words (as my comprehension skills are, in my humble opinion, extremely terrible...) But after that, it seemed nice.
Good luck!
Arianne
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