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Mind of My Own (II)

 

Stay clear of warning signs:
A hate that's seldom pleased,--
Yes, read between the lines.

The birds that fly diseased
Across a twisted sky:
War's lust is not appeased.

No, don't believe the lie
That said the bad would lose...
While pumping gas, get high.

But harbor other views,
And not just those they push,
Alone we each must choose.

So kick him on his tush,
Elect to prune the Bush.

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Written May 5th, 2004

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  • hellizacomin
    May 21, 2004
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    why did you ban me from the chatterbox? i still cant get in all i did was say a lousy sware word. big deal. woo-hoo go cry about it. wow. funnie poem but you need to learn to write about more serious stuff.


  • Fern
    May 8, 2004
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    Aww, you should see my evil bush picture. So funny, so dumb.


  • NurseHayley
    May 5, 2004
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    LMAO! I must admit I thought all politicians were dumb but they really did break the mould with old Bushy boy! lol! Great stuff, I still maintain I should be un charge cos I'd do a much better job!
    watch out world!

    Hayles x x x x


  • EidolonDesires
    May 5, 2004
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    Lol, kick ass poem!