Rooted fast
by soft velvet,
lusty eyes
beg
and plead
through black silk.
Bathed in soft candlelight,
supple, tender flesh
my canvas,
a feather serves
as my brush.
Michaelangelo,
tonight,
working a masterpiece
of prolonged
Ecstasy.
Callused fingers,
tenderly tickle
agonizingly,
around pathways
of pleasure
teasingly
tracing around
lubricious longing.
Salaciously,
sandpaper cheeks
graze feverish thighs.
Sharp intake of breath
an erogenous hiss,
you tremble
in anticipation,
ardently awaiting
my fiery kiss.
Desire rages,
as
moaning
becomes
screaming,
begging,
pleading,
for me to revisit,
and once again,
turn your delicious pages.
Author notes
Ahhh... after writing this, I wish my shower had icewater.
You might appreciate this just a little more, if you have read my previous erotic write, titled My favorite book
Written May 5th, 2004
A contest entry
- Hot Hot Hot! I Want Hot! by wellnow1313.
350 points, ended May 30, 2004, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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oooh I LOVE the part about the feather painting your masterpiece that was so totally awesome, you rock dude! quoted from Crush the sea turtle from finding nemo
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Sharp intake of breath
an erogenous hiss,
you tremble
in anticipation,
ardently awaiting
my fiery kiss.
Desire rages,
as
moaning
becomes
screaming,
begging,
pleading,
for me to revisit,
and once again,
turn your delicious pages.
EXCELLENT choice in words! Great write! Thx for entering! Good Luck ..............Sheila
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hmmmmm yummy....
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romance at it's finest
wow,what a very descriptive sexy poem,i'm impressed!! way to pen,you have great talent for romance!! this is very well done,i hope you win,hugs poetic janis -
cool write, this is a really good piece and i really enjoyed reading it. thanks for sharing such a great poem. and i will look forward to reading some of your other work. good luck with your future writings
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Great idea. As to the form, I would argue about the number of acjectives and adverbs, but it's just how I feel about it. -
sounds yummy
. Keep writing! It's enjoyable! Cheers! Daniel
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Hehehhe! Hell yeah! Wondurful piece, turn tohose "pages" and scratch those inner thighs my friend. Great piece, well wriiten and well done, Jason
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