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Turbulence

turbulence of nature
reveals a true strength
buried in serenity

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Written May 5th, 2004

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  • EidolonDesires
    May 6, 2004
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    Short but sweet. Not all of us have inner strengh though and we rely on the strength of others draining them of their life thus draining nature of its beauty.


  • Thoughtful Seeker
    May 6, 2004
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    strong,intelligent,honest

    different,but intoxicating!! i agree with what this poem is saying!! it expresses exactly how when we go through alot,it can make us alot stronger!! great job,keep up the fabulous work,hugs poetic janis

  • Arkhayne
    May 5, 2004
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    i was thinking of how the trials we go through reveal our inner strength when i wrote it.


  • April Renee
    May 5, 2004
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    different..but..i like it..good stuff

    ~*~Blu~*~