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I'm sorry

You meant the world to me.
I meant nothing to you.

I let you in on all of my secrets.
I loved you will all of my heart.
I gave you my everything,
Asked for nothing in return.

You turned away.

I lived everyday for you.
I took every breath for you.
I woke up every morning with a hope to see you.

You laughed at my love.

I wanted to be with you.
I wanted to give my life to you...

You never said a thing.
You never cared about me,
Or my love.

I'm sorry it turned out this way.
I'm sorry I loved you.
I'll never do it again.
And still,
I'm sorry.

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Written May 4th, 2004

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  • kristafaus
    June 7, 2004
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    I cannot believe someone feels as I do..

    WOW! This poem is AMAZING! I know EXACTLY how you feel! I didnt know there was someone out there who could put my thoughts and feelings into words. This is truely an AMAZING poem. I love it! This is THE BEST poem I have read on here. And Ive read quite a few! This touched me! This is how I feel about someone.... AMAZING!!
    Thank you for sharing!! And again.. AMAZING! I applaud!!!
    WITH LOVE,
    ~KRISTA~

  • IceStormAngel
    May 4, 2004
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    Your poem was very touching. I know how you feel. Very good!!!


  • May 4, 2004
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    Awww...that was such a terrific, yet heartbreaking poem! Great job on it, you have a wonderful talent! So keep up the good work sweetie! :-) I love you with everything I have! :-)
    ~~Angela~~