Squat on my face, and shit in my mouth
Shave my back, and blow up my house
Rape my mustached wife, and sodomize
my kids, wipe your ass on my towel, and
eat all my figs.
Bush you're an Oak tree
Cheney you're a dolt
Rumsfield you're an
American idol selling
smack in Pulp Fiction
Like Eric Fucking Stoltz.
All I know is that I've been
to military prison, and I'm as
USA as baseball, but that sure
didn't keep those mother fucking
jarheads from torturing me
for the White house.
So it takes very little imagination
Very little thinking on my part
to come to the conclusion
that America has loads of
Apple pie, unaffordably tart.
I'm glad I'm not a sand nigger
I'm glad I'm not at war for oil
You Americans can keep your
fucking Christian pack of lies,
and you Jews can have the spoils.
Because I am a man that's not
afraid to say, you couldn't pay me
enough to say it's okay, to police
the world with a big swinging dick.
Since everyone knows all balls
get the stick.
Come on let's abuse some Arabs
Come on let's show a little greed
After all, it's only human to kill
for what you need.
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Written May 4th, 2004
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well Jeremi, you have done it again..good for you
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Yes! Thank you- this is the type of write I'm looking for in my contest. Don't you just love how politically incorrect things make you feel all warm and squishy inside? Great raw write.
Claire
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thought provoking!!
this really kind of made me think!! Thanx, good job!! -
You win. stop the contest right now. we have our gold.
I have read this before, and fits right in with the contest rules. hehehehe.
UMMmmmmmm. paintings...paintings...whaddya want? A new one? a portrait?
that painting on "yellow" is not mine, I cant remember where i stole it...but i really like it. I wish it were mine.
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This was amusing to me..wow it was so freaking funny and true at the same time..wow again wow...it was very well spoken for.
I like the way you can express yourself. Way to go!
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i like the originality of your topic, although i was a bit thrown off by the reference to 'rape my mustached wife'....why did you show her to have a mustache when presumably the poem's in support of the husband?! Seemed a little strange, but might just be me!
Other than that, i liked it.
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having a difficult day .. they fucking sawed his head off ..
i can't stop thinking about it .. what the hell are we doing?
what the hell...
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That was harsh but it was the dam truth im glad someone came out and said it
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This is fucking awesome. I can't even barely think of a review to write, except to say that I thoroughly enjoyed this. It's so powerful, and passionate, great job, I loved it.
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Blink. Blink.
Uh, yeah. At the risk of incurring your ire, which is, apparently, extensive, I'll keep this fairly short.
I thought you had a great point, great emotion, fantastic random pop culture references. I thought your flow, at times, could use a little work.
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(More tangential bullshit:
I've just remembered Eric Stoltz played Shelley in that movie Haunted Summer, which was kind of cool too.) -
I like him TOO people that's why he has a PART in my POEME.
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Yeah, the Eric Stoltz bit jumped out at me, too (I liked him best in Fast Times at Ridgemont High, but that's just me.).
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yes. good. except, i always liked eric stoltz? kinda cute redhead with soft blue eyes .. of course he was hideously good in Mask, yes? -
Good expression, but didn't like the reference "sand nigger."
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Everyone is enraged. Thanks for expressing it.
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F'sho, F'sho. Though I would change the title to let's fuck some dirty camels.
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A sad world we live in.. forsure.. great piece of writing hun.. well penned..
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great piece as always. When were you in a millitary prison? I use to work in a brig, on camp pendleton base they had a bunch of marines and navy guys in there. It sucked ass but the pay was good.
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fight, kill, torture..all in the name of religion..sad sad sad
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Pretty sad commentary on society in general.
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Apparently, everyones'.
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Yep..As far as what we're doing over there, if I'm reading this correctly, I agree with you. If we had any kind of goal (Saddam Hussein) it has been acheived, and it's time to go..how many lives have to be lost before the point is made?
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I agree. Nicely said as always. You are so out there, it rocks. thanks for just being a writer. ~*~Jes
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Powerful words for the Medieval era in which we live.
No escaping your writing.. Good.
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