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That's What I Get For Trusting

I needed a father
But all he needed
Was a fuck
And I was willing
Not because I knew
I just aimed to please
So he did
And I forgot
Now I'm empty
Completely hollow
Through and through
And he is
No where to be seen
Which is fine by me
Except I miss
What he wasn't
What I thought
He had been

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  • I'm sorry for how you feel about wanting a father figure in your life. You were given a dickhead for a father when someone as amazing as you deserves to have a daddy. It makes me mad to know that you don't have all the things that you so rightly deserve.


  • Silent Pain18 silver member
    February 9

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    I kinda know what ya mean, except about being sexually abused. I never was. but I have seen my dad maybe fifteen times in my life and the whole time I looked up to him like he was a hero. but that's what i thought he was, and in reality, it's what he's not .


  • Painful-Tears
    February 9

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    I don't feel like there is anything I can say, but I hope you'll find some ease. *hugs*
    I hope this pain can one day leave you. I'm very sorry.

    • Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it. (Thank you for all of the comments. It means a lot.)

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