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Mobile Heart

Sitting alone at the bar, staring into my drink
My phone rests peacefully on my leg
Occasionally I look down
Maybe I missed the vibration
But sadly, no call, no message
No contact from you
No word since you switched off many hours ago
And here I am, drowning my sorrows
Because you switched off from me
Okay, maybe you didn't
But it sure feels like that to me
I feel alone, though surrounded by people
I feel unhappy, though surrounded by laughter
I feel pained, though drinking to become numb
All because of your phone and my phone
My heart is with yours
But there's a missing link
Your phone

Author notes

Written on 4th May 2004 at 17:52 GMT

*sigh* Being sad because Michael switched his phone off during a text argument.

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  • Mary-Jane
    January 3, 2005
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    I'm glad you don't have to deal with that kind of thing anymore. Confidence is a wonderful thing to have, and I know you have it now.


  • PrincessOfFire
    May 6, 2004
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    Hope all worked out. Good luck in the contest.

  • BlazingSwords
    May 6, 2004
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    aww I'll reply to your email asap. In the meantime, this definetly makes me realize all the more how you feel because of him switching off the phone. Sorry I didn't get back to you sooner, I haven't had the net since last Friday (almost a week!! AGH!)

    Ok, well, good poem, thank you muchly for entering. Good luck, and all that jazz, teehee.

    -Heather