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Sad dog

in the kitchen
a sad-eyed dog
in the dog – my lunch

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Written May 2nd, 2004

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  • sputnik
    August 6, 2004
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    xxx

    this one cracked me up! love it, sputnik


  • Mari Goes gold member
    May 5, 2004
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    lol!!! This one would work very well as a senryu
    Thanks for the giggles!
    Mari

  • ByRosesThorn
    May 2, 2004
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    cute, love the humor