Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Dawn

at dawn
breath trails write
secret messages

Author notes


Written May 2nd, 2004

A contest entry

What did you think

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Mari Goes gold member
    May 5, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    Very nice image here! I liked it!
    Well done!
    Thanks and best of luck!
    Mari

  • ByRosesThorn
    May 2, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    mmm magic* hehe

  • ByRosesThorn
    May 2, 2004
    Edit | Reply
    love the imagery of the puffs of breath and mystery and amgic u took from a simplistic thing