Everything goes black
A whirlwind of emotions
Overcomes me and
A constant struggle
Feeling it will last forever
Wont cease to try and kill me
I wait for you to save me
But I'm all alone once again
My tears dry themselves
The tears you were strong enough to cause
But not strong enough to heal
My heart feels forgotten
Its imploding with so much hurt
You're the only one who can save me
I only want you now
Why don't you want me?
I thought you wouldn't let me fall again
But Instead of catching me
You're knocking me down
Dragging what little hope I had left
Into an eternal struggle
Love hits us hard
It doesn't care it causes us pain
Maybe I should give up
I'm dreaming for the impossible
All I want is for you to love me..
Author notes
me and my boyfriend broke up...although it was both of us who wanted to...now I want him back so bad. But it wont be possible again:/
Written May 1st, 2004
A contest entry
- I want to hear about how bad you want your crush, lover or even your best friend.. by My Seven Miseries.
301 points, ended May 2, 2004, 8 entries
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Hey, yeah I knew what this was about because you were talking to me about it all.. but you never know what could happen with the rest of the world and the rest of you inside. Keep your head up
Great write Cornholia
-Fonzy -
belle!
this poem is very true.. nice work. im very sorry for your loss. take it easy
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