a craving never filled although the cock did try
though always satisfied for more she did cry
with an intoxication rivaling the finest wine
they drank together
each sip as sweet as the very first time
in spasms and gushes they shared each other
having found each other their most perfect lover
they locked in a sweaty embrace as
joys and smiles spread across their face
a desire never quenched although the pussy did try
though always satisfied she was never dry
with the enthusiasm of youth and new libido
they fucked together
like a sub shooting a torpedo
Comments
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-a craving never filled.....interesting...
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This is quite a profound piece - you take erotica and use some great rhythm and flow and excellent wording - you do this in an eloquent and tasteful way - and wow would I want to be there as one of the participants - I wondered why you used only lower case letters, but... I also was intrigued by the background color.
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bravo!
i didnt know whether i should laugh at the slight hint of comedic mood or feel aroused, lol..either way i enjoyed it..keep writing..you do good work!
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