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Stopping By The Glory Hole On A Snowy Spring Evening

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~by Gregg Rowe~

Whose shafts these are I do not know
Yet they are ready for me to blow.
Here these men have made their flock,
To place erected woodies through a hole.
I begin to take count of the stock
Soft skin penises and cum-filled rocks
Where some are straight and some are queer
And blood travels to engorge my cock
I know my joy, it’s very clear
The purpose of me being here
One gives a pump, another a shake
Masculine odours my nostrils near

In a secluded stall I sit and masturbate
And climax with the cocks I wake
Miles of man skin I do deeply take
Miles of man skin I do deeply take

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*Spanking my




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  • ShadesXofXGray
    December 22, 2005
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    This is very diffrent.. lol I love it just the same.. I love the rhyme because it is my favorite type of poem and this flowed excellently.. nothing short of genius I would say
    loved this!
    great job, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest!
    Love,
    Kid


  • tinuelena
    December 22, 2005
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    I love the first two lines. Great stuff.

    Elizabeth


  • Sadistic Lavender
    June 5, 2005
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    The imagery was quite amusing, and dare I say, refreshing. My favorite lines were 'Miles of man skin I do deeply take.' *giggles* Man skin, that was pretty great. ♥


  • blondeoverblue
    February 4, 2005
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    Just brilliant Gregg


  • NoIQ gold member
    February 4, 2005
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    Great parody -- which is never a form which is easy to work. The content brings new meaning to Frost's expression "the road less travelled". I look forward to seeing additional entries.


  • lordoftherings gold member
    February 4, 2005
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    We Both: Hi there, I am going to try out a few more and will be leaving comments on the amount of poems required to the amount of entries I produce...but please tell me I have until the closing date to do all the options, including commenting on your poems, since I am a university student and must do my homework while I spread my time with doctor's appointments, school and here, I have bookmarked this page so when I take a break from studying, I can come and play with this contest. Gregg
    Edited on Feb 04, 10:43 because ''.


  • The Phoenix Returns
    February 4, 2005
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    Aha, can't believe I'm getting so many entries already!!! Excellent work...brilliant parody. Also try out the other options but please do check out my poems too.

    Good luck!


  • -theheartofme-
    May 23, 2004
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    liked it very much.


  • LastingFeelings
    May 2, 2004
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    This is Awesome.. the picture is funny .. hehe.. umm.. Great write and good luck in the contest!
    Sam


  • Nicolette gold member
    May 2, 2004
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    Interesting!

    Something different I must say!! The imagery is quite vivid (boy oh boy, lol)!! You did a great job of describing on the "glory hole" - thanks for the smiles!


  • barefoot contessa silver member
    May 1, 2004
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    is lost for words to say for once and stares at this in shock nods her head in continue shock Like everybody else: Is there going to be a part 2?
    goes back to just gawking


  • lordoftherings gold member
    May 1, 2004
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    I think it is because I don't shy away from trying new things and taking risks that's in all the fun of it

    I'm editing this comment because after reading it, it jsut didn't sound right with the poem preceeding it

    I was talking about trying new forms of poetry silly, we have our head in the gutter tonight don't we
    Edited on May 01, 2:19 because ''.


  • Desire gold member
    May 1, 2004
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    Time for part2 ...
    Great idea about the contest
    YOU are so darn creative


  • Touchof1der silver member
    May 1, 2004
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    I loved this. For me, it was highly amusing. I remember back to earlier days when glory holes were quite the rage and a blow buddy could be found in the most profound places. I may be dating myself here, I don't know if they are still as popular today as they once were, are they? I can honestly say that this is the first poem that I have read on them and it just made me smile. Good for you for following your desire to create something.

    Ps. I like the page and pic as well.
    Edited on May 01, 1:59 because ''.


  • lordoftherings gold member
    May 1, 2004
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    Never thought of a part 2 I wrote a short story about a cop in a park washroom though, a fantasy had my friends wheeling for days...should make it a poem when is your next contest for erotica


  • Desire gold member
    May 1, 2004
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    YOU stud~
    WOW~
    I am in awe and the imagery~
    ~wipes sweat from brow
    Is there a part two to this

    YOU rock my friend~
    Express it
    and much love~Desire

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