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Beauty Surrounds Me

Flowers bloom,
A rainbow appears
What more can I ask?
The world is too gay!

A primadonna dancing
To a music too sweet
What more can I see?
Besides this graceful lady!

Friends smiling,
Lovers in love
What more can I feel?
Romance is all around!

But a loving and caring heart
Is much important than those above –
Because of all the beauty that surrounds me
None can ever compare of my mother’s love!

Author notes

i wrote this poem for my mother coz right now she is the person that i really love the most...
Written April 18th, 2003

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  • x Bright Eyes x
    March 12, 2007

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    hi i thought this was good and i enjoyed reading it thank you for entering my contest and i wish you all the best in it

  • tylersgirl12
    October 7, 2004
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    this was really sweet. this was very good and you did a good job. good luck.

    kristina


  • angelica silver member
    July 24, 2004
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    A very beautiful tribute to your Mum, a Mothers love is unconditional isn't it? no matter what you do they're there for you~angelica


  • Darianna
    May 7, 2004
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    awww this is sweet, I love my mum too and know exactly what you mean when you say she surrounds you with beauty! HUGS! Good luck in the contest! Dari x


  • mitchybaby
    April 29, 2004
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    I don't know what I would do without my mom, she has become my life, I'm so glad you appreciate your mom as well. Good luck in the contest

    sincerely,
    ~Sara~

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