I want to grab her, hug her, make love
to her, kiss her, fuck her, cum in
her as we fornicate with
the silver moon. Damien
escapes from her cunt,
consumes me whole
and spits
out my
soul.
~by Gregg Rowe~
I want to grab her, hug her, make love
to her, kiss her, fuck her, cum in
her as we fornicate with
the silver moon. Damien
escapes from her cunt,
consumes me whole
and spits
out my
soul.
I want to grab her, hug her, make love
to her, kiss her, fuck her, cum in
her as we fornicate with
the silver moon. Damien
escapes from her cunt,
consumes me whole
and spits
out my
soul.
Author notes
I was trying a new thing here, I mean you give me this pic right after supper and give me two hours to write something. And then I came up with the nonet idea, and thought, "What does Queen really want from this?", get deep down and spew out whatever is going on in your gut, well, even the meter worked out as it spewed. Also thought of every woman that ever abused me and what it felt like when I was a kid, her holding the head like that and bleeding just brought back a orgy of memories.
Written April 28th, 2004
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A contest entry
- Torture me by fire angel.
300 points, ended March 27, 2006, 12 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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What did you think
Comments
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WOW
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"and spits out my soul" i adore that line makes me wish i thought of it. Its a beauty within in itself in a kind of weird creep way te he, i like you style
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hhhhmmm.... very gross. lol.. very dark and overall just fantastic.
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hay thanks for entering tis poem was short but kl i liek it well done
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this is a good poem although not what i'm looking for in this contest..
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very nice...i like how you took something beautiful and twisted it into a nightmare. it was great. however, pleaseread my rules again...good job and good luck! -shiz
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Zealous: You are wondering if this poem fits under you contest, my idea in entering it is that it fits under the subject heading of macbre...the dark and horrific. I was raised on horror films genre, you know the slasher/teenager/testastrone rmage movies of Friday the 13th and Hallow'en. At the same time I was raised in a family of constant abuse: physical, mental, and sexual. This poem is a daily reminder for me of my reality and all those demonic movies whose them was if you sleep with the devil, then you bore the devil. The poem itself is done in a Nonet fashion, nine syllable first line until you reach one syllable last line, so the poem needs to be tight. Hope this helps you. gregg
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llol this is good. Dunno if I should be laughing but... cool.
Not to sure if it fits with my contest. I shall have to think about it. But excellent anyway! -
onerios13
okay who should we talk to on this site about my mental capacity this was just a whimsical little devil that was hidden inside of me and needed to get out that's all..,
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AHEM...having some, uh, emotional problems, my pet?
Actually, I'm VERY happy to have read this, because this is the only one so far that seems to really just go for the sexual gusto, something I will ALWAYS appreciate...
And the background is just stunning, creating a perfect foil for the body of the word...sinfully lovely...tee hee
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Wonderful background.. It really added to the whole poem. Which in itself is an erotic treat.. WHOO HOOOOO
Morbidly delishous.. (Sorry I can't spell)
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Hell yes....this was absolutely stunning and the pictures were gorgeous...thank you for entering!!...
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This isnt angst or weird this is abuse.... Maybe i've grasped it out of context but using words such as cunt dont really say fornication to me they say sado masochist. the whole poem kind of says BDSM to me...
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wow, makes you wanna think twice when the demon comes to knock.
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OOh erotivly evil and morbidly fuckin fantastic, thanx for sharing this..looking foreward to more very soon!
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Is that too much of a bite or what, and I don't know where they come from, I just go into a trance and when I am out, it is ready to be posted. Scares the beanjigles out of me!
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Well damn ..I guess that goes to show ..be careful who you fornicate with eh Very trippy..I like the twist to it.
Well worth the time you put into it. Good luck in the contest.
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I was trying a new thing here, I mean you give me this pic right after supper and give me two hours to write something. And then I came up with the nonet idea, and thought, "What does Queen really want from this?", get deep down and spew out whatever is going on in your gut, well, even the meter worked out as it spewed. Also thought of every woman that ever abused me and what it felt like when I was a kid, her holding the head like that and bleeding just brought back a orgy of memories.
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This is something completely twisted and mudane.
I like it. This is something that I never notice in your massive library before well not the weird part. 
I already knew that. 
just playing with ya. Anyway, you mean the sexual sadistic undertone in the movie. It's all about the benjamins baby. Anyway, I really like this one. Best of luck in the contest to you.
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You've visited my library before and now you just noticed Don't you think when we watch a vampire/slashing movie nowadays with our cinematic technology that people are not really thinking this already because of all the sexual undertones in the film! Just my little piece of writing about it.
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yuck, your wierd!
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