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What if

WHAT IF YOU WROTE A BOOK ON YOUR LIFE
DO YOU THINK A READER WOULD READ IT
TWICE
WHAT IF THEY SAY THIS IS REALLY
SAD.
WHAT IF THEY SAID HE IS STARK RAVING
MAD.

DO YOU FEEL YOUR ROMANTIC WAY'S ARE
HOTTER THEN THE BEST
IF SO PLEASE DON'T KEEP THAT A SECRET
PLEASE SHARE IT WITH THE REST.

WITH ALL THE "WHO DONE IT" COMPETING
WITH THE BEST.
DO YOU THINK YOUR'S WOULD PUT US TO
THE ULTIMATE TEST.

I DON'T KNOW IF YOUR LIFE COULD BE A
BOOK
BUT WE WILL NEVER KNOW IF YOU DON'T
LET US TAKE A LOOK.

PER HAP'S A BEST SELLER BUT YOU JUST
WON'T BEND.
SO I JUST HAVE TO KEEP WONDERING,
WHILE I BRING THIS POEM TO  A
END.



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Written April 28th, 2004

A contest entry

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Comments

  • Sk8rsrule
    December 6, 2004
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    luv your poem hidden hearts and thanx for your comment on my song

  • Lrigwoc
    October 15, 2004
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    GrEaT

    Nice poem .. i like the part where you say "WHAT IF YOU WROTE A BOOK ON YOUR LIFE DO YOU THINK A READER WOULD READ IT TWICE" because anyone can read a book once but to read it twice you have to actually enjoy the book.


  • xHiddenHeartsx
    May 18, 2004
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    great poem i loved it